Sensory Language

-When Mr. Jimmy asked Bud to describe his mom Bud said "She was tall and had a rose and vanilla smell."

That makes the story more interesting because you can imagine what roses and vanilla smells like but if they combine you get a real good smell.

- "I could smell the smoke as it filled my nostrils."

The sensory language can give me the smell of the smoke coming from a fire.

- "As I aproached the city it was bright, I could hear the noise cars."

That make the story mor interesting because I can a imagine a busy city in my head.